Possible Pose (For Commission)

Another commission sketch. Now we get to these two actually dancing. I decided to do some digital test colors. To be honest, I almost want to finish soft shading on this. However, I want to know if the pose looks right.

To my client: What do you think? Is the dance pose too stiff? Domo has gone through some editing (chibi arms and legs are not so good for dancing) and Sally carries most of the dancing weight here. Also I tried my best to balance the colors here, but they could always be more saturated.